A Well Ordered Life by Fred Miller

The government had always been filled with positions that required precision  and according to the department manuals covering the performance and duties of official bookkeepers  he was considered a paragon of exactitude in his field. He  in this case  was one Bartholomew Thacker  Bookkeeper V  General Services Administration  United States Government  Midwest Division  Kansas City  Missouri  office.

And though Bartholomew Thacker worked alone  slept alone  and dined alone  it would have been less than fair to say he lived a life of complete solitude. According to the regulations  his work demanded occasional interaction with others in the department. He also interfaced daily with his landlady  Mrs. Bradley  as well as with a waitress named Bea at the Way-Fair Diner  where he took breakfast each morning.

Further  he would never have considered his life devoid of color or interest. For quite some time he had maintained a collection of bonsai trees  and he enjoyed an adoring relationship with Olivia  the cat owned by Mrs. Bradley  who had rented him a room since he had come to Kansas City some twenty-nine years before.

Yet one might say his daily routines were as predictable as his attention to detail. He arose at 7:00 a.m. each morning  not a minute before or after  and following his ablutions  he would don a charcoal-black suit with a vest displaying a gold fob attached to a pocket watch  along with black laced shoes buffed the night before. Why he carried the watch no one could say. He could tell anyone the time day or night without so much as a cursory glance at it.

At 7:30 a.m.  he would make a final check of his bonsai trees to assure himself that they were positioned for just the right amount of sunlight during the day. Then  umbrella in hand  he would descend the stairs  bid Mrs. Bradley a good day  and take a moment to dote on Olivia the cat  who met him on the front steps daily unless  of course  there appeared to be a chance of rain.

Sixteen minutes later  Bartholomew Thacker would turn into the doorway of the Way-Fair Diner  as he had every day since reporting to the Midwest office of the GSA in Kansas City years before. Bea  the sole waitress in the café  would greet him as he made his way to the last booth in the back  his chosen spot for breakfast. Unless the Way-Fair was unusually busy  Bea would follow him to his table  order pad in hand. This was never necessary  since he placed the same order each day: two hard-boiled eggs  two strips of bacon  two slices of toast  unbuttered  and a cup of black coffee. Yet Bea never asked  “The usual?” nor did he suggest such a thing himself. The specifics of the exchange suited him  and the waitress understood and respected his routine.

Most days Bea would have a copy of the morning newspaper left by an earlier diner. She would save it behind the counter for his arrival and  while placing the order with the cook  Bartholomew Thacker would scan the front page. Today’s headline read: KILLERS LOOSE IN THE CITY. He gave the article scant attention  other than to note that two inmates had escaped from a Kansas prison and had been seen in the Kansas City area the day before. The two  the story said  were armed and dangerous.

By the time the check came  he would have consumed the coffee  one egg  one slice of bacon  and placed the remaining bacon between the two slices of toast and wrapped the sandwich in a napkin. This  along with the other hard-boiled egg  would suffice for his midday meal in the park  where he would read more of the newspaper he had taken with him. At 8:15 each day he would shuffle to the register  pay exact change  and hand Bea a quarter for service.

The office was abuzz with news of the killers in the city that day  but Bartholomew Thacker could not be bothered with such small talk. He had work to do and a reputation to uphold: precise data to deliver in a timely manner. This had been his mantra for twenty-nine years. What was different  and still unknown to anyone else in the office  was his plan to retire in six months and three days. On Monday he would submit the completed forms that sat in his desk.

Today was Friday and payday  and a paper check would be hand-delivered to Bartholomew Thacker  the lone holdout who had never opted for direct deposit. As always  this afternoon he would deposit the check at his bank on the route home  withholding enough cash to pay his rent and provide for other needs until the next payday arrived.

His retirement strategy was simple: he planned to move to Florida. He would give Mrs. Bradley one month’s notice  pack his meager belongings  and take a bus to Tampa. Bartholomew Thacker had never been to Florida  but he had read about it extensively in the local library. Upon arrival  he planned to stay at the local YMCA until he could find a situation that suited his needs.

He had also read about the sport of fishing  including articles on fish indigenous to the Tampa Bay area as well as the proper tackle and lures with which to catch them. This endeavor  he had decided  would become his new retirement pastime. The only challenge that remained was the disposition of his bonsai trees. He knew he could give them to the local arboretum  where they would receive proper care  but he really wanted to gift them to Mrs. Bradley for her many kindnesses to him. Still  he was not sure she would want them or fully appreciate them. He was troubled by what to do  yet he knew he had time to ponder the dilemma.

On his way home after completing his bank transactions  he began to muse over what he might select at the deli for his evening meal in his room. Though the day remained overcast with a threat of rain  he felt a skip in his step. This was a special day  the last day at the office before everyone there would know he planned to retire. Today  he decided  he would have dinner at the Way-Fair Diner  a unique experience for him.

When he walked into the café  the waitress’s eyes widened  her mouth forming a perfect O. Bartholomew Thacker smiled  nodded  and took a seat at his favorite booth. The menu she proffered looked different  the choices overwhelming  but after a brief give-and-take with Bea  he settled in and opened his newspaper to peruse the articles he had neglected earlier in the day.

A gentle rain fell over the dark streets when two ruddy-faced fellows entered the diner  shook rain from their sleeves  and made their way to the counter stools. The bookkeeper took no notice of them as he continued to scan the paper.

“What’s good here  sister?” one said to the waitress as she approached the two.

“Tonight’s special is meatloaf. Comes with peas and potatoes  bread and a drink ” she said.

“Ya hear that  Jed? Meatloaf. You think we come here for meatloaf?” Both men broke into fits of derisive laughter.

Hearing the commotion  Bartholomew Thacker glanced up over his newspaper to see who was making the stir. At the same time  the first of the two newcomers saw him and said  “What’re you looking at  bonehead?”

The bookkeeper lowered his eyes behind the newspaper and pretended not to have heard the question.

“You hear me  bonehead?”

His voice carried across the room  and the face of the cook appeared in the window separating the kitchen from the counter. Bartholomew Thacker remained still behind his paper. The inquisitor rose from his seat and turned in the direction of the bookkeeper  but before he could move  the waitress scurried around the counter to confront him.

“He don’t mean no harm  sir; he’s just curious.”

“Curious  huh?” he said  pushed the waitress aside  and started back toward the booth where Bartholomew Thacker sat  his newspaper still hiding his face. By now the cook had come out of the kitchen  his arms akimbo.

“You get back in that kitchen ” the man said. “Jed  take care of him.”

“Right  Mike.”

The cook hurried back into the kitchen  but the second interloper paused to watch the coming encounter with the man in the booth.

“Ya hear me  bonehead?”

“Yes  sir ” he said  sotto voce.

“Then why’nt you answer me?”

“Like she said  sir  I meant no harm. I’m just here for my dinner.”

“Yeah? What’re you having?”

“The meatloaf special.”

“Hey  Jed  ya hear that? Bonehead here’s having the meatloaf special.” Turning  he barked  “Jed  didn’t I tell you to keep an eye on that cook?”

The other man hurried through the swinging door to the kitchen. Shouts were heard  and two gunshots echoed across the diner. Bea screamed. And when Bartholomew Thacker attempted to rise  he found a gun barrel inches from his forehead.

“Sit  bonehead. You too  sister  across from your boyfriend here. And don’t neither of you move.”

The other fellow emerged from the kitchen and started in the direction of the occupied booth.

“What the hell happened  Jed?”

“Old man was on the phone calling the cops. Had to take care of him.”

“Served the bastard right ” the other said  and looked down at the two seated in the booth. “Don’t neither of you screw with us or you’ll get the same. Got that?”

Two ashen faces nodded in unison.

“What now  Mike?”

“We gotta get outta here  Jed. See if there’s a back door.”

Sirens could be heard in the distance as the killer raced through the kitchen door and quickly returned.

“Alley’s dark. Can’t see where it goes  but we best duck out that way.”

“You go ahead. Take the girl. I’ll handle bonehead here and be right behind you.”

“Don’t hurt him ” Bea said. “He don’t mean no harm.”

Jed yanked the waitress by the arm and through the kitchen door  and the other turned toward the bookkeeper.

“I know the neighborhood  and I can get you past the cops. She can’t. Take me ” said Bartholomew Thacker.

The headlines the next day read: ESCAPED CONVICTS KILLED IN SHOOTOUT. The article noted that the two  along with an unnamed accomplice  had been downed in a hail of bullets from police a block away from the diner. A cook had been killed in the café  and a waitress there remained the lone survivor. The paper noted that the woman was too shaken to be interviewed at the scene.

Investigators found a government ID  a money clip with cash  a watch with a gold fob  and three postcards of Florida in the coat pocket of the deceased bookkeeper. Once it was determined that he had no next of kin  his personal effects were turned over to the landlady who had found an envelope marked “In the Event of My Demise” in a chest of drawers in his room.

In the letter written by Bartholomew Thacker  he instructed the reader to retrieve an extra charcoal-black suit from his small closet to be used for his funeral. Also  he wanted his watch fob in his vest pocket in full view. He left his prized bonsai trees to Mrs. Thomas Bradley  his landlady. All other assets were to be split equally between Mrs. Bradley and Ms. Beatrice Blackwell  an employee of the Way-Fair Diner.

Mrs. Bradley and Ms. Blackwell were the only two to attend the funeral. The department where he had worked had designated a representative to attend  but a problem with the GSA office in Washington  D.C.  had caused an untimely delay. Thus  no one from the office was present.

As it turned out  Mrs. Bradley was thrilled to receive the bonsai trees  and word has it that the plants continue to thrive. Also  a photograph of Bartholomew Thacker  enlarged from his GSA ID card  hangs over his favorite booth at the Way-Fair Diner. Few who frequent the café today seem to notice the picture; fewer still seem to care.

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