Not Right by Erik Svehaug

While at the gentlemen’s college his guardian had selected for him  Danford Fortegeist had dressed the part  made the rounds of dinner parties and cotillions  shook the proper hands  but  the whole while  since he had from the cradle discerned with a naturalist’s eye that plants  animals and all the systems that surrounded them ran by patterns (if it were God’s or the Devil’s  no matter!)  he had lined up the influential folk he met  like winds carefully released from Aeolius’s bag  so that he purchased the entire county of his birth  when he returned home  parlaying his understanding of agriculture and economics and his inheritance into forty thousand acres of living  breathing laboratory.

He didn’t consider himself Emperor or God  but explorer/scientist/gentleman in the new order of society  ahead of the approval of his fellows of at that point in time. Within the Bible  which he still read on Sundays from an unexamined habit of his own rearing  his closest affinity was with Abraham  willing to sacrifice  willing to be head of a great nation  though he had no desire to walk anywhere near that close to God  unless there was an as yet unforeseen payoff in it for him.

He had room and money to try many things  but was keenly aware of how short his lifespan could be; on this point  he often bartered with his Maker. Every square inch of the countryside had a purpose  even if it were fallow. Here was tobacco  there was wheat; rice next to the long-staple cotton of his family’s heritage  a field of sugar beets next to a field of shortstaple cotton whose durability impressed him.

His looms made the rough linen that clothed his workers  and the strong  slow dark river turned trees from his forest into planks and kernels of his wheat into flour  when its waters were channeled properly Danford developed his own currency that didn’t resemble the fly-away paper money of the day. The paper was heavy  the writing reddish and crudely engraved on whitish paper. The folks of the County called them Master’s dollars and they could be used at the Mercantile or Livery or saloon or freight office in town for local things  since Danford owned them all. He owned every door knob  pickaninny  and bolt of cloth  and folks within the County used this currency to transfer value between Danford’s various enterprises with almost no writing; just a little reckoning once a month. And it certainly kept the population at large from building up any sort of pile of pilfer off of the books. Nowhere to go to spend it that they wouldn’t be spotted. Certainly not going to leave the County with it. Only Robert and Zachary  the Outside man  knew where Master kept some of the currency he used to commerce with the outside world.

Danford sought an advantage by procreating with his female slaves to multiply his workforce  since the law spelled out the continuity of ownership of a child born to a female slave. Having once tried the process with Rebekah  the attractive fifteen-year old daughter of his millwright  he found cross-racial fornication to be the uncomfortable opposite of orderly: rather smelly  messy and unnecessarily emotional; draining  on the whole. Fruitless  he traded her for two scrawny toddlers and their mother through which he immediately achieved the returns he desired. From then on  pretty virgins became trading stock for two or sometimes three bucksprouts; bigger numbers  more quickly  than he could have achieved by prosaic copulation.

Those first two emaciated children  arriving in the Rebekah trade  allowed Danford another experiment. He assigned one to House and one to Field and raised his new House boy in parallel to his biological son  the product of his own successful match with an Atlanta belle of good breeding  attached to him by marriage the same year he planted the first of the sugar beets.

The young House boy was called Fancy because it suited his Master to fill him with all manner of learning and serving as an experiment in culture. During his first years  he stayed with Betsy  the cook  in the good Quarters. He ate when Master’s son  James  ate at the low  blue table  near him  ready to be finished whenever James was  so he learned to eat quickly. He listened  wondered  pondered and practiced on his slate  while James’ tutor lectured and examined James in Master’s study or on the screened porch  if it was very hot.

After midday  he learned to help at the forge while Earnest  the smith  sharpened tools. He watched with admiration as Earnest changed a chunk of glowing iron into an axe head or the blade of a hoe. Earnest had lines on his back from something called Lightin-Out. That must have hurt. Fancy never wanted to do that. They talked about a lot of things. Earnest told him that before Fancy was born  Master had made Earnest bunk in the good quarters with Betsy for a while but when no children came of it  he moved him back out.

“Not right " said Earnest. “Wouldn’t do it." Earnest had a wife somewhere. Unlike Earnest  other men weren’t of the Book. When Master gave Betsy other roommates  she had several babies. Fancy was like family with some of them  some older  some younger. Earnest told him Master’s experiment with Fancy was something new.

For a long time  Fancy was confused about mothers and fathers. It turned out one of the field hands  Emma  was his birth mama. He caught glimpses of her most days and got to say hello to her almost every Sunday. She said he was really from a place he could never see and from good people he would never meet. He should be proud. He didn’t understand that  either.

Once a year  on what they said was his birthday  Betsy let his mama come to where he was sleeping to tell him stories. Fancy was a little scared of Emma  at first. She had scar-dots circling her face and eight long  deep scars on her back  like Earnest’s.
When he turned three and then four  she described a jungle with vines like ropes  leaves as big as shutters  and strange mouth-watering fruit. Past his bed crunched animals bigger than wagons  slithered snakes more poisonous than Cottonmouth  slunk cats sharp as saw blades. She told him of his Songhai relatives and their stories.

On the story night of his fifth birthday  she gave him his name: Bì-bìrì meaning cords-into-rope  when he could be trusted to never tell anyone and if he did  the story-visits would have to stop. He also learned to say: ęnu  mouth; eti  ear; and owo  hand. Emma told him a monkey story and laughed. Then  snuggling against Emma in the bed  Timbuktu of a thousand lights spilled like a lingering sunset onto the hills of his knees. Camel trains carrying gold and salt trekked across his blankets to the markets of Arabia. That night  he was of Benin and Mali  Songhai and Morocco. What dreams.

The night he turned six  Emma had him imagine himself in the heart of her stories. He became Brother in a cornfield scaring the crows off his own family’s field. He became Sister  washing clothes in the shady shallows. He was Mother  cooking at the hut fire; Father  sleeping after a dance. He was little Boy caught  scraped and dragged  rope-chafed  marched away from his village home  huts burning  head shaved  branded  stuffed into a boat like a floating box. The lightning bugs outside the window were frantic eyes. He startled  felt the scratchy hands of Emma cupping his cheeks. “You was born here  but all around you is laundry-Sister  cornfield-Brother  cooking-Mother  singing-Father. They are here."

Fancy got up and looked out the window. A light moved from one room to the next in the Big House.
“You cannot talk of our story  Bì-bìrì. Like your name  it must be your story only; something for you and me to know. For now." He sensed her deep anger and the urgency behind the stories  as though they didn’t have much time.
More things he didn’t understand.

At five years old  Fancy eyed some of the pretty orange nails on the anvil that he wanted to show Master James. He grabbed them in a hurry  while Earnest’s back was turned. The bits of iron seared his palms and fingers  binding themselves to his flesh. He bared his teeth and screamed without stopping until Betsy put a poultice on his hand; his first experience with intense physical pain.

The scars formed raised angry lines across his right palm and fingers that looked like the lines on Earnest’s back. When they cracked open  it made it hard to write or hold the file or do anything. For a while  he couldn’t even play marbles with James till he practiced with his left hand a lot. It took a while to read his own handwriting on the learning slate.

Sometimes  the boys had free time  usually when Master was traveling and the tutor took a glass of juice  his cigar and a book onto the screened porch by himself. Fancy and James and occasionally Litany  the tutor’s daughter  played marbles or Hide-the-Switch or rolled hoops. At Easter  when Fancy was six  children from the next plantation visited and they played Duck on the Rock. Fancy tossed the ball and raced and laughed. Maybe he laughed too loud. Their game stopped all of a sudden and James told him it was because of grown-ups who didn’t hold with Master’s experiment.

One day  it was just Fancy and Litany. What started as cartwheels down the long green melon-scented grass slopes turned into wrestling and then rolling together whumpity down the big hill behind the manor house. The high-pitched voice in his head kept singing 'yippee' and when they stopped rolling and he sat up straddle of Litany  he felt his loins move and he passed 'ippee' and was into new territory.

Betsy snatched him up by the armpits and hissed: “You go on in the house now  Miss Litany  before you daddy sees what you been playing at." She skewered Fancy with a look. “Ain’t you learned nothin'  'cept numbers and names?"

He involuntarily thought: Homo Sapiens Negroides  as he’d been taught with Master James. In front of a long mirror  he had been told to strip off his clothes alongside a detailed drawing of a white boy. Master James made scratching sounds disproportionate bone length of the thigh." When James held up his slate with a scarecrow drawn on it  Fancy laughed explosively. He had expected to see himself formal-science looking. The Tutor caned him twice on the thigh.

By age seven  Tutor said Fancy could take instruction well enough to help Betsy in the kitchen. She gave him washing and peeling jobs and sometimes let him measure and stir.

When he turned eight  he was also allowed to ride in the mule cart with Long Jake  the teamster  when he went to town for supplies.

One day the list said: a packet of needles  a spool of pink thread and a small bag of peppercorns. Long Jake was waiting alongside the front door of the store  with the cart. The total came to two-eighty-one.

Fancy said to the shopkeeper: “Here’s three " and handed over the three one-dollar coins.

The shopkeeper dropped them in his apron pocket and held out his hand again. “Now then  one-eighty-one " he said.

“That’s all they give me; I give you three!" Fancy was outraged. For this counting he didn’t need his slate.

“Not just one dollar  I give you 'em all! Look on the floor  maybe! I give you three! NO!!"

The shopkeeper’s hand crashed down across his face and Fancy collapsed in a pile  hitting his head on the floor.
Long Jake carried the purchases in paper in his pocket with a note for Master. Fancy  fuming and bruised  walked alongside the rig. “I didn’t lose it; I give it to 'im!" His head throbbed and his face felt huge.

“Take it slow now. I mean  real slow." Long Jake stopped the buggy so Fancy could climb on. “Let 'em think you is dumb."

“I ain’t dumb."

“No  I know you ain’t dumb. Point is  if they think you is dumb  you’sgonna be alright. And slow and easy fit right into dumb."

He gnawed on his lower lip a moment. “Only one way outa this now. If you don’ member losin' them dollas on the way there  best 'member losin' them before we gets back. They’s lost  but you ain’t. Yet."


Busy with a neighbor in his parlor all that afternoon and evening  Master wasn’t informed of the incident until the next day after breakfast. Robert  the inside man  ventured: “Robert give out ten strokes of the cane yesterday  Master  on Fancy for losing shopping money.

Store account still says $2.81 owing. Do we pay that?"

Master Fortegeist was now an Assemblyman who believed in wisdom and progress. He templed his fingers in front of his face  elbows on the table. The old mantle clock ticked away a minute. “Let Fancy decide how to repay that  Robert " he said  after some thought. “I wonder what choices he will make if the cost is a dollar a lash on Emma’s back. Or would he substitute four lashes at twenty-five cents each on Earnest’s back? Maybe we can offer him ten cents a lash on his own back; or a penny a lash on … your back  Robert!"

Robert’s eyes widened and he bit his lower lip.

“I’m just playing with you  Robert! Don’t look so grim! Have him choose today. Administer tomorrow. I’m curious how our young Fancy will resolve this dilemma. Never too young to discover that life is abouttrade-offs. Isn’t that so  Robert? And  of course  we pay our debts."

Furious with the injustice  at sundown  Fancy reported to Robert that he would take as many lashes as he could  which in his brave  angry  seven- year-old mind was seven or eight  maybe more if he could hold his breath a lot and bite something between his teeth. He would ask Earnest to hold still for four lashes  since he was strong and healthy and had done it before and probably already knew about breath holding. That would make probably almost $1.80  if he had done his slate right. Though he didn’t want to ask her or hear her cry of pain  he was sure Emma would take one lash for him  since it was just one and worth a dollar and she was family  and he knew she would forgive him. That would make $2.80.

As dawn lit up the trees  fences  grass and whitewash of the plantation and chickens clucked  crickets clicked and milk drilled into the buckets in the barn  Emma came to the kitchen door. “Betsy  I need the boy " she said. Fancy had already built up the fire  so it was okay timing.

“Just get him back… you know… for Robert." Betsy gave Emma a soft look.

In air thin and crisp  Emma led the way past the store house  past the good Quarters of the House servants  past the patch-planked Quarters where the field-hands and Earnest lived.

At the old footbridge cross the river  slick with moss and loose with rot  Emma said: “Bì-bìrì  you smart  but there ain’t enough time to let you understand what being owned is about and what being sold is. You been young and that’s one thing. But when they whip you at that post that gonna be over. You think you is part Master and part Earnest and part everybody and you ain’t. You black and you Songhai and never did sposed to be here."

Emma snatched him suddenly from behind and hugged him to her. She wrapped her legs around his and threw their bodies into the water. She was thin as a frayed thread  but her arms were strong as ropes.

Daniel Fortegeist was vexed with this unexpected and unnecessary loss.
























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